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Jessy19
11-01-2003, 10:10 AM
Ok I've posted several stories on incest, fantasy and one on masturbation. I get over 300 reads but no feedback? Am I missing something? I would like at least just a little feedback. Well I acutally got two feedbacks so far which i really appreciate. I just wanted to ask for feedback from the lovely readers here. A writer loves getting responses *s*

Lilith
11-01-2003, 10:47 AM
Jessy19~ don't be disheartened! I recently posted a thread about this in the chat area as well. A good story, when read produces a response. Often one that requires the reader to 'take care of things'. By the time they have finished (literally;)) they don't think to come back to be a critic or to say thanks. If your stories were disliked you would get tons of feedback cause they would have time to give it to you:D

Pad159
11-03-2003, 12:13 AM
Jessy19.... I have read many stories on this site but yours is the first that has made me want to make my 1st post. Fantastic....

Jessy19
11-03-2003, 08:52 PM
Lilith, Thanks for your response *s*

Pad, I am very flattered by your comment. Thank you so much! I only hope to post more stories everyone will enjoy *s*

studstewy69
11-03-2003, 10:51 PM
Your stories are great. They are some of the best ones that I have read in a while. Keep up the great work!! Hope to read more soon :)

Bluedude
11-27-2003, 10:28 AM
Jessy19
That had to be one of the most thought about and well written stories I have seen in a long time. Keep up the good work. I've got some stories on paper I need to send; maybe I can return the favor.

Jessy19
12-08-2003, 08:40 PM
Thank you all for your response! I hope to hear from more of you :)

ScottWaz
12-09-2003, 02:10 AM
I love your stories! very hottt !! would love to hear more! :-)

chris2525
01-07-2004, 03:22 PM
Jessy,

I have read most of your stories (on other sites before joining here) and I have always been very impressed with your writing. Please keep up the wonderful work!

A Fellow Texan :-)

Captain_abusive
01-09-2004, 04:23 PM
got to say you write like a champ very good stories hope to read more soon

Grumble
01-09-2004, 10:08 PM
Hi Jessy

I have just read your "Falling Star" story (again LOL) and I think you have a talent. There is an emotional element in your writing that makes an enormous difference from lust only stories.

being a romantic man, the love part is something that is as important to me as the sex, it is the glue that binds it together.

So you can take it that Grumble is an avid reader and appreciates your writing. Thank you for the enjoyment and please keep writing

Jessy19
01-09-2004, 10:37 PM
Wow thank you all for your lovely comments! :)

lori25b
01-09-2004, 11:17 PM
i have found a factination the the subjects you have wrote/posted, am now exploreing my inner sexual thoughts and fantasies more,

Jessy19
01-10-2004, 07:51 PM
Lori I'm glad to have influenced you and you don't know how much that means to me! right now I feel my ego growing ;)

Grumble
02-06-2004, 07:55 AM
Jessy,
just read your witches love story and it was great

thank you

Jessy19
02-06-2004, 09:17 PM
Grumble! Thanks for reading my wicked little tale there I really appreciate it :)

intrigued
02-18-2004, 02:43 PM
Silent Night, Naughty Night

I just read that one, may I say that was an extreme turn on.... I liked the little gifts at then end......

Thanks for the great story...

intrigued
02-18-2004, 02:47 PM
Your poetry in Literotica is truly amazing....

I love the use of very vivid details and expressions..

Once I get more time I plan on reading some more of the stories you have on Literotica....

Continue writing , always love to read more from the mind of a female that shares the same age as myself...

rabbit
05-14-2004, 09:59 PM
Jessy, some really good writing...can't wait to see how this turns out!


rabbit

IowaMan
05-15-2004, 09:28 AM
Gotta say Jessy that I've got an awful lot of pleasure from reading your story about the boy who found his birth mother. It is very well written and well, for lack of a better term, flat out hot. I've read it over probably 10 times and let's just say that I'm drained after reading it each and every time.

Keep up the awesome writing Jessy!

rabbit
05-23-2004, 07:43 PM
Whoa! That ending totally blew me away. Excellent spin of a very taboo subject.

rabbit

sancho
05-26-2004, 11:53 PM
jessy, i've absolutely loved everything you've written. i look fwd. to any new stories you have. very, very naughty. ; )

studstewy69
05-31-2004, 10:33 PM
Jessy I just finished reading you last story Abandoned. I use to think My Brother, My lover was the best story that you ever wrote. This is without a doubt, the best stroy that you have ever wrote!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and can't wait to read your next story. :)

Jessy19
06-01-2004, 07:12 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful feedback! You don't know how much that means to me :)

Jessy19
06-07-2004, 08:31 PM
Ok I just added a few celebrity stories on the fantasy section and would love some feedback on them :)

sancho
06-08-2004, 11:16 PM
jess,
your imagination is incredible! including norah jones in an erotic story is simply genius. unfortunately i don't think i'll ever be able to look at her the same way. ; ) great job as always. i never thought of n 'sync being cool but that gangbang was awesome! soooo hot. thanks.

dicksbro
06-09-2004, 03:33 AM
Just read, "Marrying A Prince," and it was marvelous. The mental images were so vivid. You really have a nack for bringing a story to life. Thanks!

Jessy19
07-10-2004, 07:06 PM
Hey thanks guys for reading my celeb stories. I just posted a new one about Avril Lavigne. :)

IowaMan
07-12-2004, 06:47 AM
Another great one Jessica! I've gotta admit, I don't think I've made it through one of your stories yet without having to take a washcloth to my stomach when I was done. Very hot stuff!!! Keep 'em cumming!!!

Prophet Reality
07-17-2004, 12:05 AM
Amazing stories Jessy. And Lilith is right, kinda hard to think of sending in compliments and praise when you are recovering from a really good orgasm. Please keep posting these amazing stories.

Jessy19
11-20-2004, 11:42 PM
Aww thank you all. I'm sorry I've been away for a while but I lost internet service. I'm back hope to write more stories for you all to enjoy :)

wrestlemark
11-22-2004, 01:39 PM
Thank you all for your wonderful feedback! You don't know how much that means to me :)
are they fact fiction both very hot and sexy would love to read more ...great writer thanks for my arousal and interest in your thoughts :sex: :d:

Jessy19
01-20-2005, 03:24 PM
are they fact fiction both very hot and sexy would love to read more ...great writer thanks for my arousal and interest in your thoughts :sex: :d:


My stories are fiction I just make them up in my own perverted little mind :)

I'm sorry guys I've been away for a while, I promise to post more stories soon :devilish:

faerie_princess
01-21-2005, 10:53 PM
I Love your stories! keep em coming!