Feedback on "An Apple for Miss Mindy"

[Southern Charm]

I must leave feedback for some of the best writing I've ever read in "An Apple for Miss Mindy" in the Interactive/Role-Playing Stories.

Gra(e?)ybread and Jaylene(?) both did a MAGNIFICENT job of relaying this story and making it come alive. And an especial ovation to Graybread for his writing style. You have true talent, sir.

My only constructive critisizm would be the length of the quotations used to solidify the situations. A bit over the top.

I'm not sure if this story is finished or if there will be more adventures with Miss Mindy and Shawn, but, rest assured, I will be awaiting more work from these two authors, whether it be in this scenario or any other.

Bravo.



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[Graybread]

Originally posted by Southern Charm
I must leave feedback for some of the best writing I've ever read in "An Apple for Miss Mindy" in the Interactive/Role-Playing Stories.

Gra(e?)ybread and Jaylene(?) both did a MAGNIFICENT job of relaying this story and making it come alive. And an especial ovation to Graybread for his writing style. You have true talent, sir.

My only constructive critisizm would be the length of the quotations used to solidify the situations. A bit over the top.

I'm not sure if this story is finished or if there will be more adventures with Miss Mindy and Shawn, but, rest assured, I will be awaiting more work from these two authors, whether it be in this scenario or any other.

Bravo.

Thank you dear, your ovations are truly noted.:line:

I had to leave all the quotations in, just to finish it. I certainly couldn’t leave it half-complete.

And yes, there will be more coming from Jaylene and me, although I think this story is coming to and end.

I am so glad I came across her, she is indeed a wonderful writer, and as always, I am inspired by my co-writers.

Graybread