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I confess
I Confess, im a Dreamer.
i get lost when i should working thoughts of lust and desires green fields and snowy peaks my love is my life and her soul is beautiful i don't know what im saying half the time im speaking i babble on and my thoughts are elsewhere i flow through my life without a care but one she is my being. my thoughts my mind my everything soon we'll melt together we'll take walks. and play jump and run sing and just have fun to all those that are dreamers like me i praise you. and please don't forget your dreams they will come true if you believe trust in yourself and your partner because thats all you have in this world is eachother sorry if its off beat... my poems normally suck.. i hope a few people can relate tho |
I understood your poem.
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thx
btw if anyone else has something they would like to say about their lovers.. or lives or just anything in general please by all means go ahead... =) |
He
He~ that which is not mine He~ that which I ache for He~ that which I shall never posess He~ that which my soul thirsts for He~ that which can quench my desire He |
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Far from 'sucking' Ranger, I thought it was excellent! Your lover is very lucky to have someone express their thoughts this way. Lilith, simple but speaks volumes and I can definetly relate. Thank you both for sharing. I wish I could write and tell you of my love... How he makes my life complete in so many ways, Filling that void deep in my soul, Giving me love, laughter, life... Even knowing 'we' will never be and he'll not be 'mine', It is enough to have even a small part of him. |
thank you for the kind words..
and both of your poems are lovely. =) |
Wow. All three poems are achingly romantic!
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I didn't think mine was a poem. Thats why I said 'I wish I could write'. But TY for the kind words. :)
Any other poet pixies going to add a poem? |
Hi Ranger
I like your poem, it stirred feelings in me One thing I suck at is poetry, I am not a bad wordsmith at other writings though |
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