
01-28-2007, 05:00 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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Yup loved the new chapter. I really liked the whole thieves guild part, but i am usually attracted to that kind of thing in fantasy books. Not sure if is just me though or whether perhaps the second sex scene is kinda... jumped into. It's like, well thats the conversation part over, here's the sex. Maybe a little bit of overlap would do it.
Actually, I've just reread it and I disagree with myself so never mind...
Cant wait for the next chapter though... 
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