Love it, love it. Though I hope you'll excuse me that I kinda skimmed over the map section. Nothing personal, I frequently skip passages when I'm not in the mood for description. Laziness I guess...


Thought that the progression into the sex was a lot more fluid this time too. Though I'm still not sure whether that was to do with my skim-reading in the first place!

Look forward to seeing more writing! (Soon! )